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Rain
| Rain comin' down Thinkin' back, thinkin' forward Been places, didn't want to go Wanted to be, haven't got there Found some shiny glimpes Never found the gold People and places Saw a lot, not nearly enough Thoughts of someone On the mind, now and then Sky's getting darker Another window meets the ledge Rain comin' down |
posted by Eaglewing at 5:34 AM
Comments on "Rain"
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Anonymous said ... (December 03, 2007 1:26 PM) :
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Eaglewing said ... (December 04, 2007 4:23 AM) :
post a commentI like it! This is so good! Write, write, and write more! You pay tribute to the use of "words" anyone who can say so much, with so few words, needs to be writing continually!
Thanks for sharing - I will never look out a window again without remembering how it 'meets the ledge.' :)
More please!
thanks! every now and then inspiration comes to write something :) have to do more though, so it flows better.