Monday, December 03, 2007

Rain

Rain comin' down
Thinkin' back, thinkin' forward
Been places, didn't want to go
Wanted to be, haven't got there
Found some shiny glimpes
Never found the gold
People and places
Saw a lot, not nearly enough
Thoughts of someone
On the mind, now and then
Sky's getting darker
Another window meets the ledge
Rain comin' down

Comments on "Rain"

 

Anonymous bookworm said ... (December 03, 2007 1:26 PM) : 

I like it! This is so good! Write, write, and write more! You pay tribute to the use of "words" anyone who can say so much, with so few words, needs to be writing continually!
Thanks for sharing - I will never look out a window again without remembering how it 'meets the ledge.' :)
More please!

 

Blogger Eaglewing said ... (December 04, 2007 4:23 AM) : 

thanks! every now and then inspiration comes to write something :) have to do more though, so it flows better.

 

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